I have (stolen/kidnapped) your (most valued possession here) I will give it up for no less than all your money. I have it hidden in (a parking lot/warehouse). You have no chance of finding (it/him/her). Attached to it is a (bomb/explosives) which will go off at (12 p.m./2:17a.m.). If you haven't fulfiled the following (demands/"requests"):
1. All your money to be placed in a (dark alley/shoe warehouse).
2. An evaluation on how we performed in this ransom.
3. The above requirements to have been acomplished in exactaly 3 hr 56 min and 23 sec. not before and not after.
After these demands are meet you shall find your precious (most valued possession) exactaly where you left as though nothing happened, though I guarentee you it did, you just failed to notice. You will find this note to be (untraceble/indestructible). You will never find me. You will never see your (most valued possession again unless you accomplish the above demands.
Sincerlly Yours,
(your least favorite person)
This is very creative, it has much comedy in it. I can see the thought that went into this. The only flaws I am finding are in your structure, you might need to add a comma here and there or change the wording to make it a bit stronger.
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